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That flash made me remember something.... :D lol
I see that you've made progress, you're drawing is getting better but you could work a little more on it. Also, I see that you have a great sense of humor. Continue like that and you'll get far :D
In the futur, you might want to do it a little bit more long and have like a different storyline for each episode but with the same Taliban.
also, to make it less predictable, you could show broken rails and just before the cart get an accident, you could make the Taliban explode. That's not predictable and pretty funny.
Author's Response:
Thank you. For the next episodes, that is what I planned. For your mother-f***in' stupid intention to tell me how bad you would have made this flash, I don't give a S-H-I-T like d'say Miss Abel.
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I loved the BOOOOOORING part lol
I also like the all you have to know about metal gear part lol
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There isn't many flashs and movies that have made me cried like that. My heart have been touched.
Thanks.
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The idea is awsome but I know you could have done better on certain aspect
Here they are :
-Instead of drawing lines for the portals, you could have drew them with style. It gives the spectator an effect of 3D
- The rope and a little peice of shit was still in the air when the platform got destroyed
- I know that if you work hard, your able to give the feild an effect of 3D
- The stick could have used the feild more than they actualy do
Otherwise, I find that the animation is pretty fluid and if you work more, yor nex flash is gonna be +/- awsome.
Oh, and I love how you drew the weapon :D
Overall : 3 and 7
keep it up :D
Author's Response:
Thanks Edalas, your comments are really helping me or maybe not.
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rank: colonel
Points: 66,936
combo: 41
missiles endured: 3813
missiles disabled: 153
perfect hit: 287
Accuracy: 120 %
Resources saved : 5065
Kills: 1616
Can you beat that ??? I'm not sure, I'M THE KING
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The song is from Cornandbeans of FFR. Good game. Do you know that rose is the first part of 3 so you could maybe use them, it would be funnier.
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Not as good as FFR but not bad...
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sorry but that was shity and its nothing compared to FFR, DDR or Stepmania.... sorry
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That was an awsome game but I play FFR and it would be funnier if there was a greater difficulty like god, guru or somethings like that 'cause, for me even hard was easy.
good game tho.
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The song is {Firestorm} from FFR :D
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